Show Not Tell 2

Feeling down

It was the last minute of the Match Basketball competition. Tama was in one of the teams shoots three times with all his might but doesn't make it. He was thinking to himself ‘ Why am I not doing right, did I forget something, what’s wrong with me” he sighed until one of the team members say something that Tama didn't like he tried to fight back but he failed and lost the game

Excited

Mary was screaming and shouting ‘ yay finally I am going with Jan for shopping, to get a beautiful dress” Just then Jan said that we are going in a few minutes but in a rush Mary was panicking, her hands were sweating she had goosebumps all over her body Jan felt tired she sighed and thought of leaving Mary at home and just go without her.