My second maths D.L.O

My question is 584 + 725 = ?? so watch it and leave me some feed back and tell me if I was right or wrong.

Dhara's Review Pixie Tricks ( The Greedy Gremlin)

Book Title: Pixie Tricks ( The Greedy Gremlin	Author: Tracey West
Reviewer: Dhara class 4	Grand total of books read this year: 2
Book Genre: (Highlight) Fiction Science fiction Drama Romance Mystery Horror Comedy Series Fantasy Other (state) Non-Fiction Biographies/Autobiographies Historical Instructional Other (state)
Reading Level: Easy Medium Advanced	Rating: (Leave how many stars you rate it.) ✩ ✩✩✩✩✩
Review: (Optional - Give a brief review of the book) This story is about a girl named Violet she was eating her cereal, and thought to herself are fairy's really? and just thought, until she heard something it was Sprite the pixie tricker, she was sitting on the edge of Violets bowl eating her cereal with her tiny mouth. and said to Violet ' hello I'm Sprite, and if your wondering why am I so small is because I am a Pixie Tricker Fairy". Violet was confused and said 'hello sprite my name is Violet, why are you here ?", 'well I am here because there is another world of fairy's and some had escaped, and the Pixie Queen had sent me here to get them, Will you help me ??".	Excerpt:  Violet Briggs just met someone who's really out of the world. He's a fairy named sprite and he has a huge secret! Fourteen other fairy's had escaped from the other world and causing all kinds of trouble.It's up to sprite, the Pixie Tricker, to catch the fairies , but he needs violets help . will Violet and Sprite be able to trick fourteen fairy's into going home before its to late.

Dhara's Food Party Animation

Dhara Food Pary from Team 5 PES on Vimeo.

Here is my food party animation. I did this all by myself in an amount of time. I hope you have fun enjoying my animation. By Dhara.

Article Judith collins

Judith Collins is a New Zealand lawyer and politician was born in 1959 24 February in Hamilton, her parents were dairy farmers Percy and Jessie Collins, Walton in the Waikato, she was one of the six children that went to Walton Primary School. in 1977 and 1978 she studied at University of Canterbury.

My Holiday Writing

Last Friday my family and my relatives had a great party it was so awesome. The first  thing we did was called our relatives and invited them to our party. My mum and dad were bringing food and I served it and then had drinks but not me, because I was hungry instead. So after drinks we had snacks my favourite one as well but it turns out my favou` rite are their favourite so I had less during snack time,  I had got out my Ipad and started to play flappy bird it was fun then I got bored was on my last turn, just then my 22 year old uncle ( Roshan) sat next to me and said ' Hey what ya doing with a jolly smile on his face". Then I relied ' just playing flappy bird" then he said what's flappy bird ?, and I was like " ARE YOU KIDDING ME "  and he's like no never played it". So I showed him and his first score was 19 and my one was 18 just one less than him, after that I told him to download but he didn't pay attention anyway's.

At 7:30 my dad and all my uncles went outside to have a drink. "Come on lets not be crazy here" replied Dhara, I have never seen anyone in my family drunk I mean never in my entire life. So they went outside and got the BBQ out to cook the meat, so I was so excited and hungry I kept went outside and inside just to check if it was ready or not so I sat there bored. Just after 3 or 4 minutes later it was ready suddenly my mum had spicy rice with chicken in it and so did my aunt, and my mouth was watering and dreaming the table was already ready and the food was placed and we just digged in so everyone had normal amount of food in their plates but mine it was like if I had made a food tower out of it, and suddenly I just lost it because I didn't have snack well just a little, but I did eat anything until it was time for the dinner.

At 8:00 my plate was spotless and I was really full but I didn't get fat, which was odd, so we all sat down for a while and played a game together called what am I acting like it was really fun, at 8:40 we had ice cream and said our good bye's.

My Math strategy.

My question is 224 - 78 = ? so here is how I solved it 

Show Not Tell 2

Feeling down

It was the last minute of the Match Basketball competition. Tama was in one of the teams shoots three times with all his might but doesn't make it. He was thinking to himself ‘ Why am I not doing right, did I forget something, what’s wrong with me” he sighed until one of the team members say something that Tama didn't like he tried to fight back but he failed and lost the game

Excited

Mary was screaming and shouting ‘ yay finally I am going with Jan for shopping, to get a beautiful dress” Just then Jan said that we are going in a few minutes but in a rush Mary was panicking, her hands were sweating she had goosebumps all over her body Jan felt tired she sighed and thought of leaving Mary at home and just go without her.