Netbook Reflection 2012l

For my netbook it has been challenging this year . Its been challenging because sometimes the internet to slow when a problem appears ,you have to solve what has been mixed up ,placed in wrong files
and then thats when our problem starts happening ,then you start getting nervous .

So far with my netbook I,v been searching up things using Cybersmart because when you use Cybersmart
you can tell more differences between a paper,pencil  or a netbook or an ipad if you chose to go for a paper,pencil
it might be a bit boring if you carry that on a long time .But if you chose a netbook for an example you can be creative or you can be solving problems out .Sometimes you can take the lead of something that you're interested  in.

Since I have been with my netbook I have found out some problems .so for my excuse is the screen is a bit too small to see  there's sometimes killing pages that won't disappear when your trying to get rid of, sometimes
when you try to log on it takes about 2 minutes or our webcam and sounds isn’t high quality and our netbook can be easy to break.

I would like to say thanks to Mr Burt Mrs burt Miss Tele’a and Neavin  for letting our school use netbooks.

The day when the m,m brothers became soldiers is when they were silly  so the m,m brothers were poor but they only had a house , TV so they real names were mosa Mohammed but they realised that both their names had started by the letter M just then they heard that there was an soldier's job but they didn't have money at all but the tv said ‘ITS ALL FOR FREE’’.

After that they said “LET JOIN THE SOLDIER” .so they went to they went but before they went mohammed said we would never quit this job not even a million years Nek Minute Oooh bumpers said mosa then out of the blues came the inspector ,said I am sargi hillerson your inspector so you can only call me hillerson not sargi .Because my mother is only and my dad he said and all the soldiers laughed so loud.

That the inspector got out his pistol and shot at the ground then the inspector said to the brothers
go and shoot something but remember to watch out for a black pitched snake it will trip you over.
If you don't look where your going you will trip  over the black pitched snake over so they went.
The brothers did not listen to him they just kept on looking cool and kept showing off their guns just then  Mosa saw a ice cream truck and forgotten what had the inspector said.  look over there it was a ice cream truck but there really wasn,t so Mosa yelled it out and  they them kept rushing
Nek Minute  they tripped.

Wave Rave

Every friday me and Anamei go to the pools to have to win competitions,
races and me and Anamei  sometimes win but its always good if we have a good time
in the pools by the way last friday was amazing the people who owned the pools had
brought a new rocket but it was filled up with air.

Then the lifeguard had called us up out of the water to tell us what was going to happen
then the lifeguard said we have a new air rocket. But this is a competitions what do you
have to do is just walk all the way to the end and jump of but you only have to walk not
crawling because if you crawl all the way and make it to the end you will not get a prize.

But the challenging part is we will have to squirt water in your faces so you can fall off
but you have to have balance or you will just fall of so me and Anamei  had to thought this out
if we crawl you lose if you walk you win. So we did it like this we crawled halve way and got up
and walked all the way to the end but when everyone had a chance to win and me and Anamei
cheered for the others but there was just one problem they didn't tell us the price so we asked them what was prize.

And the prize was the penguin when I looked at the penguin and said okay. But in the penguins
hands had free passes to disneyland but this time it was a race the first one to the end of the big
pools so we went in the big pools and we were touching the wall just in case for cheating
then the lifeguard said on your marks.. get ..set.. GO .Then so we started to swim but Anamei was incredible she was coming first I was coming second so when we got to the end me and Anamei where a tie but I gave my disneyland ticket to Anamei since she was tie anyway

After that we went home because it was very late.   
                                                                                       
hope you like my Wave Rave story

My Groups work made by Chloe,Dhara,Martha,Quziyah

The shops

In 2012 There  were new shops in the street near Pt england those shops were so empty that not even a single
person came in them to buy something like ice creams ,ice blocks or chips or anything at all . Just then one of the shop keepers thought of something to bring customers to come in to buy something but there was just one problem
the shops looked spooky and horrible then the mayor said  so you decided to leave the shops aye but but but Buts
are for sitting on you better get these spooky and horrible shop better looking or you are all FIRED HE YELLED.
Then those shopkeepers looked down and thought about how awful.

So they all  decided repair and repaint the shops then when they finished it looked all girly girl and looked at it again and said nope thats awkward  so they repaint it again and did it boystyle  but it looked so cool only hip hop people came in not normal people and they said nope that too funky so they did it but had to use and sharp scraper and scraped of the painting they did and said that was just a waste of time and worked hard so much that the sun made them sweat until finally they did it neatly and the customers said you have been working so hard. We'll come to your shop and buy something.

Just then the  mayor said great job I like your shops now since I like them I will buy something to so he brought almost everything and he thanked him and said goodbye but when something were gone  they had to close the shop and put new things in and the shops started running everything went great and that was the end

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At The Beach

Yesterday it was going to be the school camp at school . So we all had the tents,tables,chairs
then on the first day everyone had to get there togs and goggles to go swimming in the nice warm
water so we all grabbed our goggles and wore our togs and jumped into the water everyone had made great splashes in the water. Until a great white shark haden came from the blues  swam by the shore and a adult said shark shark get out the water shark”.

Then everyone came out of the water with fear in their eyes as the shark opened it’s mouth as wide as a he could then everyone screamed very loudly that the principal  woke up in a fright just then he got out of his bed went in the shower dressed up back in his PJ'S then he went ohhh man I,m still in my blue PJ'S then he went back in the shower
and wore styling clothes and ran out the front door went down the hill and saw just kids scream then he said why are you screaming with a gasp then the kids said we we saw a shark in the water with with an big mouth. Then he saw the white shark the sharks eyes were red as a rose a big mouth as wide as a rock and and a very pointy nose as pointy as a needle then vanished into the deep.Then the kids said” now you believe us Mr Burt and said yes I do .


The next morning this time Mr Burt woke up early and had got everyone up at 1 then  said who want to kill that white shark he said and no one raised their hand no one upset no his name was alex he got all the gear and shared it with Mr Burt and started to hunt then they went on alex,s grandpa,s boat and went to sea but Mr Burt his Tuna because he loved tuna just then they saw the great white shark then the shark smelt tuna from the air and yelled I want to eat your your delicious tuna then Mr Burt said but why he said ? because I,am very hungry I had nothing last night.

So Mr Burt thought for a while and gave that tasty tuna to the shark after eating the.The shark said thank you very much
he said then he set off to sea and never return then when Mr Burt turned around he saw alex just standing there with big googly eyes just staring at the ham sandwich just then Mr Burt said “alex come on lets go back to school so they went back and told everyone what had happened os thats why never ever go without a midnight snack or you will starve .

From Dhara hope you like it.

Olympic Event

was invented long ago; a form of sport played in ancient Greece and Egypt. Badminton came from a child's game called battledore and shuttlecock, in which two players hit a feathered shuttlecock back and forth with tiny rackets. The game was called "POONA" in India during the 18th Century, and British Army Officers stationed there took the Indian version back to England in the 1860's. The army men introduced the game to friends, but the new sport was definitely launched there at a party given in 1873 by the Duke of Beaufort at his country place, "Badminton" in Gloucestershire. During that time, the game had no name, but it was referred to as "The Game of Badminton," and, thereupon, Badminton became its official name.
Until 1887 the sport was played in England under the rules that prevailed in India. They were, from the English viewpoint, somewhat contradictory and confusing. Since a small army of badminton players had been recruited, a group formed itself into the Bath Badminton Club, standardized the rules, made the game applicable to English ideas and the basic regulations, drawn up in 1887, still guide the sport. In 1895, the Badminton Association (of England) was formed to take over the authority of the Bath Badminton Club, and the new group made rules, which now govern the game throughout the world.

My Favorite Athlete

Did you know what happened to Valerie Adams. She won medals from silver to gold .
Because the reason why she had won the silver is because another athlete named Nadzeya won a gold but.When Valerie Adams saw Nadzeya with the gold she said that is nonsense so then she said I will swore to Revenge.

Then got jealous and went through then went outside and saw her that she is taking drugs just then when the  judges found out that the new athlete has been taking drugs.It made the judges looked horrible at Nadzeya took steroids so she got disqualified to take steroids . her culture tonga she supports New Zealand.

when I grow up I want to be an athlete like her representing new zealand
and be supportive.She is very much like a wrestling star because she is so muscley.
With her muscles she can develop strength by throwing a shot very far.

Sneezes

Do you know why you sneeze? Well you might have got it from a person or might have got it
because you might have an allergy from something. Useaully when I sneeze I break holes and widows and Or you might have sniffed out some dust or had sniffed smoked some how .

Anyway I when I clean the house and I have to dust the shelves and tops of furniture so when I dust them with the duster I sneeze very loudly and my spit goes where I dusted It is very disgusting when I sneeze it's pretty terrible  plus I do the worse sneezes in my family but I don't sneeze in the classroom that loud it will be too embarrassing for me.

When I sneeze in the morning everyone wakes up and say to me can you please be quiet
we are try to sleep here so everyone can hear my sneezes in my family upset for one person my
dad so whenever I sneeze or shout right up to his ear I does not notice because he wears ear blockers even he when is not wearing them he still could not hear me  so I even though I try still could not hear me because he is a deep sleeper . 

saving the hump back whale

One day a man called Michael Fishbach was sailing a boat when he saw a dead Humpback whale just staying still in the water and knew there was no sign of life.

So he went near the whale and try to not frighten it he looked under and found out it was exhausted to get it self to be free and it was really dangerous to be near it.

So Michael was cutting the gill net with one small knife . the whale was trying to wriggled and jiggled slowly and it took a hour to get the gill net to get out. After an hour the whale was happily free .

Later he got the net and kept it away the Humpback whale jumped
so many times that the thankful whale whacked its tail to say goodbye.

Holidays

In the holidays at night time I went to my grandma’s house for dinner.

When went inside the kitchen she made indian sweet call barfe . Barfe is the delicious treat that you have for a mouth freshener  or sometimes at a indian celebration. Just then my grandma showed me the best treat she made for the first time she felt very nervous because if she served it before tasting it might taste a bit mild.

                                                                                                                                                                                     But i knew that she makes the bestest sweets in my family.She showed me the one that she made and I took a bite and said "Its all goods GA." That's short for calling her grandma. After that when everyone had a bite of the delicious treat it was nice.

The next day just then my uncle said "Who wants to go to sylvia park then everyone put their hand up so when we went there we went to see the games where the cinema was just the I saw a bouncy ball game but my aunty said hey do you want watch a movie then we yes then she said what movie do want to watch then we watched ice age four my brother ,My cousin wanted to eat subway so my aunt left me in charge so she can get them a subway till then we  played  the bouncy balls then  I asked  my cousin and brother do you want to go to the movies now then they said  yeah lets go so we went inside then watch that after that  we went back home to have a rest then My dad said now it is  time to go home.


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Dhara Pissaro

"This is my new rock star"

Fatu,u

last week room 16 has been working on their maori art from Fatu’u . Mr Somerville has been telling us all about Fatu’u showed us his pictures ,painting, and drawing they all looked creative
I started to get the picture so.Mr S said we frist had to go on our netbooks and search of his
pictures and then  draw it on a light paper I had an large paper and started lightly  on the paper with my pencil then I had to get three different colours and colour it in beautifully so it looks cool.
The next day was freaky because we were gonna use the indian ink the whole class thought    that it was gonna be normal ink but it wasn't that ink was dangerous because if we get it anywhere on our clothes or hands it will never come off so Mr S had taken 10 painting holders
to put the indian ink in after that  Mr S carefully put in the indian ink in so we all started gently over lining the pencil marks we did with the ink.
Today is our last day of finishing our lovely art so we only
had to finish our art with the indian ink
I hope you like my story

From Dhara

Swimming story

Last week Room 16 has been learning how to swim. The first thing that we all had to do is change and get into the pool. Anamei and I were buddies, but I felt bad because I can’t swim until I get better at it, but when I saw Anamei, she was vs Levi and Jabez. I cheered for Anamei but when ever they had races, Anamei always seemed to be winning. Just then, the swimming teacher called out the winner and she said “ The winner is Anamei ’’ I was really happy for her.After that I felt board so I went to see raeleen and the others. I sat there and watched them as they swam in and out of the water. It was quite fun then. I saw Quziyah. She did well.


After two minutes later, the class had to get out of the pool. I saw Giselle. She was having lots of fun in the pool. I felt ashamed of myself because I couldn't go swimming with my friends. Then it was time to go back to school. So everyone had to change back to their school uniform. When were walking back to school I was walking with Giselle. I now have to  remember to bring my togs.


I hope you liked my story

Aussie rules

On Wednesday room 16 went to go to play aussie rules with room 17 because it was the last day some of the classes were  a bit sad because everyone liked to play aussie rules and our three coaches were Nita, Sam and Brandon they show us how to do  drop punt ,faces away from lachesis .So Nita wanted us to play a game grab to the ball the classes had to kick the ball ,our teachers and coaches had to grab to balls just then everyone had to chose their buddy I picked Quziyah because she was alone .


just then Mr Somerville asked her can you please take some photos with action so Mr S lended the camera to take pictures of us kicking the ball just then we had to go back to sit on the bench
to listen to our coach then Nita said that we're going to play tag but a different tag game but we have to do drop punt. So Nita said  if you are it and you want to tag someone you have to have a ball and drop punt to tag just then I had been picked to be it just then sam yelled out octopus
then everyone ran to the other side of the court that time I only had got 2 runners to be the seaweeds and wriggle their arms to try and get people just then It was time to go back to class.


My favourite part was playing tag using drop punt I hope that we come back for
our next lesson hope you liked it .

Week 6 - Term 2

This is my progress for this week I hope you enjoy.

My Pirate Story

DHARA Plan  charters Lararen,Max,place Lost Islandanimals SHARKS,Mermaidswere? atlanta

Hello my name is lauren and my funky parrot                                                                                      pirate me and max were going to have an adventure on my pirate ship to search gold on a lost island with mermaids,sharks and all sortsof things so me and max were sailing in the sea searching a lost ISLANDwith misery things out of this creepy island has an wonderful ATLANTISOne day there was a pirate called Lauren and her parrot MaxLauren was sailing her amazing pirate ship she was having a lovely dayon her ship just then she saw an tornado Lauren was terrified nek minute the tornadohits her ship swirling and swirling around then .
Then the next morning POOR  Lararen woke up with sadness then she yelled out MY BEAUTIFUL SHIP IS TOTALLY WRECKED IN BITS ‘thanks lord you sure made that a surprise which it was the worst surprise I'd ever had in my life so’’.  Lararen grabbed her map and entered the opened bushes later Lararen saw an huge hole in these big rock attached together just then she fell into it then it was the full moon then she trip into an small pool then she quickly got out when she felt the water it felt like something coming then she hid behind the rocks but ever she saw she was wowed then she whispered to her parrot do you know that it was? a Mermaid she was an beautiful one she had a colorful tail that stand out the colors were blue,green,yellow.
and her tail it was shining because of the moon light then I thought that it was time to show myself so I came out then the Mermaid went back to normal then the I said hi then she grabbed my parrot and jumped into back to the water and swam away then Went after her but when I went after her there were sharks so I went back in the water and swam as fast as I can .
But when I saw the mermaid she was swimming slow the she swam fast as and vanished  in the dark next  thought that it was a good or bad thing to do to go and rescue my friend Maxbut I knew that Max will always help me with the map and I know that I can not be in awesome places with out him so I had what it takes so I swam into the darkness and what I saw really amazing atlantis.
It was really beautiful and there I saw my parrot with that mean. Mermaid then I swam ,swam tillfinally I caught her tail and dragged her down and snached Max from her hand and swam back but I stole an ruby and went till finally I reached the end and I swam back when I got out I ran all the way back with the ruby and went to her ship and said to her parrot hey are you okay and ‘replayed no way I never wanna go to this this place ’’.well at least you are  here with methen just then Max said look the ruby its shining at our great ship. Till finally the ruby made the ship back together again but after when it was all  fixed  it was time to get homeafter 3 years? Lauren and Max became famous because of the ruby and they live happily ever after.

Ben Carson

On Tuesday we went to see Ben Carson to learn more about books. We went to the big stadium for a special Duffy Assembly. Ben Carson told us that if we read books we can learn things from it.

When he was a little boy he threw rocks at cars but after he picked up the rock he got a book and read all about rocks. At his school every one called him a dummy but he said, "Okay, I am a dummy because I can't answer any questions in class."

But one day at school his teacher said to her class, "What is this rock called?" Ben knew what it was called but waited for someone else to put their hand up, but no one did. So he put his hand up and the kids said, "Look, the dummy has something to say!" They got ready for Ben to say something funny. But instead the teacher said, "That's right!" The kids were so surprised!

sWell guess what Ben Carson said the cool people are acting cool but the slow learner are better because they work hard. He told a story about this boy who was acting so cool that girls liked him. Then guess what happened? When they were both finished collage the slow learner (Ben Carson) had a really good job and the cool dude didn't even have a job at all!

Then Ben Carson went beyond and had earned trophies and had got married. But the cool dude got poorer and poorer. So you see you don't have to be cool you just need to be a person who works hard to reach your goal!

All About Me

Hi my name is Dhara and I’m 10 years old and my birthday is on the 12 of May. I’m Indian
so people sometimes like to to tease me and I don’t like it. I’ve got long blending black and    
brown hair and sparkling brown not really.
 
FAVOURITE THINGS
My favourite sport is swimming because sometimes it just makes me feel slim like a mermaid. My favourite singer is Jennifer Lopez on the floor ft Pitbull because she totally rocks and
my special tv programme is H2o just add water because it is all about mermaids and
mermaids are my favorite creatures, my under living water movie is dolphin tale because its a true story healthy. My food is subway because it’s tasty and my favourite PlayStation game is good vs bad and my best game on the computer is Mos-hi Monsters

Hobbies
My hobbies is drawing because once I was on my dads laptop and I was looking at  scraft girlfriend for 10 minutes. Just then I,d grabbed a big pad and started to draw but what ever I’m doing I was just scribble on the pad and it was just a waste and I like to help my teacher  so they don’t have to be lazy all the time. Sometimes I like to help my mother with the dishes so I get something for the mall for myself also I like to go to the MC Donald's  but just once a day.

Favourite subject and Worst subject
My favourite subject is writing on paper and painting. My worst subject is to put lots of things into my files on my netbook.