Thursday, July 4, 2013

Rapunzel twist

Once upon a time there lived a girl named Rapunzel. She had long blonde hair. Her mother always told her not to trim her hair because every time someone gets hurt they go to her and she heals them for at least $600, but she doesn't  listen at all. Rapunzel was not  very kind and she was a really disrespectful girl. She never was allowed to go outside which is why she had a problem with respecting others.

One day she was so frustrated and tired that she wanted to go outside. In the spur of the moment she ran away from home and left a note on the dining table. The note said “Hey mum I am coming back later but I just wanted to tell you I want to play outside, don't find me” Just then she told a lie, her mum didn't know that she was running away for good.

When her mum got home she yelled 'Rapunzel let down your hair,Rapunzel,Rapunzel I said let down you hair'' she started to look all around the tower and didn't find her.Her mother was very worried and and said to herself “I can't leave my daughter alone I must go and find her”.

She was looking for Rapunzel in the woods when Suddenly she heard someone crying. It was her daughter.Rapunzel thought she was lost. As soon as she saw her Rapunzel hugged her mum and said “I will never be disrespectful I am really sorry”. Rapunzel listened to her mother and never ever was disrespectful. She loved her mother.

She lived in a tower from then on with out being disrespectful. One day while her mum went out to gather some things to eat a prince appeared at the foot of the tower. Rapunzel saw him and let down her hair. The prince grabbed her hair with his hands and yanked it down. Rapunzel fell down into his arms. She and the prince rode away on a horse. Suddenly they rode past her mum who shouted out “Rapunzel what are you doing?!” Rapunzel yelled back “You can keep my hair anyway!”. She then cut her hair with a sword. Her Mum screamed, her heart beat faster and faster, she suddenly turned white.She couldn't take the pain her heart stops beating and she turns into dust and dies. Rapunzel look back at the dust and smiles with saddness “Thank you for taking care of me”.


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